The Last Drop
Jake Carter stepped out and the
cloud of dust billowed by his ship was still settling. He crinkled his eyes
instinctively at the sudden flood of sunlight and put on his sun-glasses. He looked around only to find dry, arid land
that seemed to extend beyond infinity and the horizon was walled by huge sand
dunes. This was the land of his ancestors. His forefathers had lived here and
died here. This is from where his race began. It was the land of stories and
sighful nostalgia. It was a distant green memory. It was the place his
ancestors called Earth.
Jake was here to take back home,
what belonged only in his fairytales – Water.
Funi prayed the Almighty for his graceful blessing and
mounted her camel. He was her guiding hope and strength; not any map or compass.
She had none of them. She was the leader of the caravan set out on the quest
across the Tehnnulae – the merciless Desert that was once so dense a forest
that light could not slip in; so the old witch told in her wild stories. She
led the group of the fifty women of the Toubou warrior clan across the vast
emptiness in the quest for the scanty elixir of life – Water.
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Noah Calvin checked the map for the tenth time in
half-an-hour. You could easily get lost in this vastness of sand and dirt. The
map kept fluttering in the wind of the moving vehicle. It was an archaic map
and it was his last hope; so he clung to it with all his determination. He
constantly made sure that they were on the right track. He was at the head of
the fleet of the fairly large convoy of SUVs and the three huge trucks that
held their supplies and the essentials for the expedition.
He clutched the map closer to
his chest. This was the treasure map. They sought something more than a
treasure; they were in search of a new hope, their last hope – Water.
This was practically the first time
that Jake was stepping out into the real world; the world outside his sterile
one. For the first time, he felt the real breeze ruffle his hair, the sun-light
burning his skin deep. The scorching heat and the singing air dint bother him
for a moment too long. He had experienced all this back at the Home. But, all
those were artificial. This was realty. The real air, the real sun, the real
heat and the real world.
Many centuries ago, when the
Earth became unsuitable for human life, his ancestors began moving to their
other colonies in the nearby planets. They dint adapt to the new environment;
they could not. So, as always they modified the environment to suit them. They
intensified their work on the Homes – the enclosed environment that was
designed to be just like Earth; the elements, the temperature, the rain, the
soil, the air and the water. Just like earth. But this Earth was manufactured
in labs and corporate industries. It was Earth in all its goodness sans the bad
face.
Jake worked for the Martian
Hydro Works. The water manufacturer for the Mars Home. Human life there was in
perfect harmony until the previous week when a freak catastrophe in the Hydro
Labs destroyed the water Source. The Source was the actual, real water that the
first settlers from Earth had brought with them. The composition of this water
was duplicated for creating water for the consumption. This had been going on
for centuries. It was a fail-proof
system. Well, until last week!
Jake was never concerned
with how actually the Water was created from the Source or what caused its
destruction. He never burdened himself with unwanted knowledge. He was the
‘muscle’ of the system. The primal requirement for the ‘brain’ to do its work.
He was entrusted with a
mission. The mission to travel to Earth and bring the actual water that would
be the new Source. The reserves would last not more than a week from now. In a
way, the existence of Human race depended on this mission and that’s why he was
chosen for it.
His first ever sweat dripped
down the side of his face.
“OK boys, lets go and get some Life.”
There were some who stayed
back. The ‘Faithful’ as they called themselves. Those who ‘dint scamper away
like filthy rats’ – to put in their own words. Even when the world was
crumbling down in the aftermaths of the War, the pollution and all the
manufactured calamity and people decided that the World can no longer sustain
them, a few of the humanity, stood fast, reluctant to leave their home and
forsake it.
Now, there were no nations
and borders. There were handfuls of Homo sapiens that reached out to each other
and clung and bound. They now lived as small colonies, constantly looking for
other such colonies and assimilating into each other.
Noah Calvin was born in one
such Colony and as if his destiny were chosen when he was christened, he grew
up to become the Head of his Colony. It
was duty to keep them alive and it was this duty that he was fighting for.
These last remnants of
humans of earth lived a nomadic life. Well, anyway they had the whole of the
Earth for themselves now. It was as if the clock of civilisation were turned
back many centuries. It was a strange combination of the presence of scientific
advancement and the lack of its complications.
In short, they were
inventing fire; but from the plasma.
Like the early nomads, these
Colonies often shifted their dwellings and Noah was now with the search party
looking for the next area for settlement. But, they could no way settle in the
desert, but to get to the better greens, they had to cross this huge landscape
of heat and sand. Now, Noah had to part this ocean of sand to lead his people. Their journey had reached the fringes of the
desert. Now what remained was the ultimate crossing. But, before that could be
done, the people needed to rest and they had to find food and water sufficient
for the journey.
Noah had heard of the oasis.
It was mid-way in their journey. It was perfect. With the reserves that they
had now, they can travel this long, replenish at this oasis and continue their
pilgrimage to better life. So, finding this oasis meant just more than finding
water.
The location was obtained
from an old hard-drive in the erstwhile police data centre of the town the
group had tented in for now. it was an old map but there whispers in the air
that this oasis still existed. As a leader, it was Noah’s duty to make sure it
really was still there and if by God’s grace, it was there, make the journey to
the greens. It was more of a reconnaissance.
“How much more distance do we have, Greg?” asked Noah searching
the horizons of huge sand dunes.
There are people about whom
the world doesn’t care; and who in turn remain equally oblivious to it. Funi
belonged to one such group of human beings – the forgotten tribes of the wild. Many
forgotten centuries ago, the likes of her ancestors’ lives became
civilizations. Some flourished, some perished and some others remained as they
were forever.
The Toubou of the Amazons
were one such clan. Primarily a forest-dwelling warrior tribe. Man alters his
environment to suit him. But, in places where the nature overwhelms him and
when he has no means or power over the Nature, he gives in; adapting himself to
his environment, making a silent agreement of co-existence. Similarly, when the
Toubou found their forests disappearing slowly, they adapted themselves to the
dry and heat. Alas, they dint know that their divine forest was becoming
board-room tables in a corporate office or fuel in the fire-place of an
aristocratic mansion. They dint know that their home was burning down to
charcoal.
Now, their dense forest had
become the vast desert and over the centuries the Toubou cultivated and honed
their survival skills for the desert.
The Toubou had their
Shalanat – the ‘Water-seekers’. These were the ones who could navigate their
way through the desert to the oases scattered across. They were always women,
as the Toubou believed that women were excellent navigators. Funi was trained
to be one. One of the very few that were left. It was generations of knowledge
assimilated and passed on. Funi’s mother had trained her and now it was
imperative that she pass on the skill to her daughter, Shehde.
Funi was the Shalanat of the
caravan that would travel across the desert and bring back water from the oasis
and rations after trading their camels in the village across the great sands. They
always travelled as large group which had the strength of numbers.
The survival of the clan for
the next four moons now depended on Funi and her women.
Funi looked back at the assembled group and said, “Lets begin the
journey for our lives. The Almighty will guide us there.” She smiled
encouragingly at Shehde and tugged the reins of her camel.
“Trust the big ones, not the
small.” Funi said to Shehde pointing to the sand-dunes. “The small ones are
temporary. They are here now, but they wont be there tomorrow. But, the big ones
will stay for a very long time.”
“How long do we have to
travel to reach the Shahlam?” asked Shehde. She was much curious learn as was
her mother to teach.
“We have to travel three
days to reach the Shahlam. We have water just for three days. We have to make
it by the third day. Otherwise it is going to be very difficult. So, no
unwanted delays. By the end of the second night, we will reach the ridges. From
there, the journey becomes tougher. We have to cross thirty-three ridges. At
the thirty-fourth, there is a shrub. That means we are in the right path and
the Shahlam is nearby. Before the fortieth ridge it is.”
Shehde listened attentively.
“You have to be careful
there. It is very easy to miss it. Many people have lost it and have never made
it home. But, don’t worry we will find it.”
Noah need not trust on the
natural landmarks or instinct. He had his map and the voice-guide. They still
had almost two days’ travel and then would reach the end of what they called,
the ‘firm-land’. From there, it was hard-core loose desert sand. Their SUVs
would be of little help. And so, they had other arrangements. The companions
bred just for this – the desert horses. Swift and abled in the loose sands of
the desert. These were the precious cargo that the trucks were holding in
addition to rations and arms. From that point, they would mount the horses and
ride the desert the old-fashioned way.
Jake Carter dint have to
bother about the hassles of transporting the animals. He had his hovers. Advanced
versions of the hovercrafts. They could just slide over the sand. But, they
would be slow. That was one sacrifice they had to make. But, it would be
impossible to travel with their usual vehicles. They were not designed for the
loose sand. There was just no desert back there at Home.
But, Jake wondered why they
just dint land their ship next to the Source? They knew the exact co-ordinates
for God’s sakes. But, Greg the engineer gave him a ten-minute lecture of
science jargons oasis to why they could not do it. There were all these
non-sense that he faintly remembered to have heard while back in the Classes.
He dint care about them even then, why now? Jake just asked Gary to snap it
shut and propose alternates.
“We are here.” said Gary
zooming in on the Cartographic simulation model that virtually rendered the map
in three dimensions. “We are the edge of the desert. We are now stationed in
the fringe of the desert. Beyond us is the mighty desert. It’s all sand and
dust and we are not designed for that. It is completely new geography for us.
For scientific reasons that we need not discuss now,” he looked up a brief
moment at Jake and continued, “we cannot dare to venture into the unknown. We
have to be over-cautious and so have our hovers. We must sacrifice on speed
here.”
There was a ripple of
unsatisfied moans in the group.
“We remain camped here for
two days from now and make our arrangement and also sync ourselves with the new
environmental parameters. Once we are sure that we all are tuned-in for the
environment, on the third dawn, we set out to get the Source. This is the plan
we have worked out. Is there anything more Jake, sir?”
“That will be all.” And Jake
dismissed the group with a stern nod.
Three groups spent the next
two days progressing in their quests, but oblivious of each other and what lay
ahead of them.
On the night before the
ultimate dawn, when the women had rested for the night, Funi pointed to the
starry sky to Shehde ann said, “You see that bright big star there? If it is
behind us, we are in the correct direction.”
Shehde nodded diligently.
“Shehde, tomorrow you will
lead us to the Shahlam. Follow the ridges and your heart. The Almighty speaks
there.”
Shehde dint realise the quantum of the responsibility laid on her
little shoulders. She playfully ran to feed her camel with the other children.
On the fateful dawn, the sun
rose over the ocean of sand with the dynamic waves forming and falling. There
were three souls that were awake even before the sun.
Jake Carter was running
through the final preparation for the last leg of the mission. The men and
machine had worked feverishly through the night and just retired to catch up on
some sleep. Jake’s mind refused to be rested. The mission was in his blood, in
his system. He felt restless. The burden of the responsibility on his shoulders
sent him into a mood of deeper calm. He was volcano inside, but looked a placid
lake on the outside. He walked through the machines, arms and men ready for the
greatest journey of their civilization.
Noah Calvin simply sat
outside his tent and was watching aimlessly at the twilight horizon and the
fading stars. Benjamin, his falcon, a gift from his father had just returned
from his hunt with a rat. He was beside Noah busy with his catch. Noah saw the
light illuminating the night and the warmth returning. His people trusted him.
They looked upon him to lead them to better lives. There were women, children
and men back in the camp hoping that Noah and his men will come back with the
news of the existence of the oasis and that they can make their journey to the
greens. There were dreams and hopes. Noah held them all. He kept looking at the
sky as the stars went missing one by one.
Funi knelt down for her
prayer. She prayed for courage and luck. She dint pray to be bestowed with
luck, but not be stripped off it. Her instincts and her knowledge is all she had
and a whole village depended on them. if she made a little distance, it would
mean the fifty women and children getting lost in this landscape of sand that
keeps changing every minute. She prayed again to the Almighty for his mercy
again for this day.
As the light became
stronger, the groups had commenced the journey having no idea that their lives
were to be entwined this day.
“Mamma, look... look...”
Shehde cried out in excitement. “Mamma, look i found the shrub. It is just
where you told! I have been counting the ridges and yes, it is exactly there,
mamma!”
Funi kissed her daughter
encouragingly. She had made her proud. She
will learn soon and she will be a good Shalanat.
It was just past the
afternoon. The sun was tilting towards the west. Funi looked out hoping for her
instincts to find the direction of the Shahlam. But, something else caught her
eye! In the eastern and the northern horizons she saw huge clouds of sand. It was
not a sandstorm. It meant something worse.
Noah had noticed the two clouds
of sand. Competition was not part of his plan.
Jake looked at them with
utter confusion and shock. There were other people heading towards the same
destination. With the size of the clouds billowed, they were huge groups. So,
there were people left on this planet, a lot of them and more so those who were
his problem now. and the mission just got interesting!
The three leaders sensed
what was coming. They had to be fast. The ones to reach the oasis first can
claim ownership and will be in a better position of defence. Survival of the
fittest. To reach there first, they had to move and move fast.
Noah Calvin signalled to his
men and they tugged at their reins, kicked their horses and rode wildly billowing
up sand, towards the oasis like the treasure hunters for gold!
Jake Carter took the control
of his hover and raced ahead. Pushing the engines mercilessly to their limits. The
convoy of the machines slid across sand leaving behind trail of huge sand
clouds.
Funi kicked her camel hard. The
primal warrior instincts took over the women and the animals seemed to have
sensed too as they frantically towards the destination.
There was only one thing in
all their minds – Water and get there first.
The oasis came into the view.
All the three groups had reached the periphery at almost the same time. They all
stood there at a distance from the oasis encompassing it from three directions.
Each looked formidable to the other.
Benjamin, Noah’s falcon was
circling around the scene viewing it from high above.
The three leaders stepped
forward.
Jake in his hover, Noah on
his horse and Funi on her camel.
There was not a single word
exchanged. The looks told them all. Here was competition. The winner would have
it. Now, it was a matter of life and death indeed.
Jake turned to his men. It was
time for a war. Probably the first one. The first real one. He addressed his
men sternly and as a captain should. “Here we are. Without full arsenal and
preparation in an unknown planet; in an unknown land. But, here lies our life
and the lives of our children and friends back at home. What we do here will
decide our civilization. My men, fight for your life, fight for your future. Lets
take back home this liquid life. ”
“This is our home. Our planet.
Our resources.” Noah bellowed. “No one else can snatch from us, what is ours. Look
there, that lake contains our dreams, our future, our hopes of better lives. Beyond
it lays a green and prosperous life. Lets go and get our dreams.”
Funi had her bow drawn out. Her
women were in readiness. The fire of the warriors kindled inside each one of
them and it shone in their eyes. They knew, this water belonged to them and no
one can snatch it away from them. They had given-up a lot. But, not this time,
not this.
“Until the last drop...”
Funi yelled the war-cry and the three battalions raced forward.
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This
idea struck me when there was a competition on theme ‘The last drop’ announced in
the office, for the UN Water Day (22nd March). But, of course, i
could not complete it in time for the contest. But, anyway here it is.
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The central
idea is to portray the importance of water. How scarce it will go in the future
and how much we will still need it. Lets make a determined effort to conserve not just Water, but the resources that Nature has gifted us. Lets use them judiciously.
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I attempted
to include the three levels of civilization, three level of mind-set and
economic levels too. The fact is, wherever we are, we need Water.
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Jake
Carter – of course Jake Sully + John Carter :D what else occurs to me when speaking
of future life in outer-space and Mars? :D
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Noah
Calvin of course is clichéd.
·
The
major inspiration for this is BBC’s Human Planet episode 2 – Life in the
furnace.
·
It features
a segment on the Tubu women of Sahara desert who navigate across the desert to
find a small well. Funi and Shehde are real people from the feature.
·
I have
not read it in whole. So, there are bound to be some factual, grammatical and
plot errors! :p


Comments
Other than that, I'm as usual amazed at your creativity! Hats off! You've done it again! Shame that you didn't enter this for the contest in office. :) Congrats. :) :)
1. try to imagine a reason and comvince yourself :D
2. switch of your brains when you read my writings :D
hmmm, lets say, this was the quicker and easily accessible source for them!
well, anyway its embarassing that i left such a huge gaping hole and thanks for pointing it out!
That 'gaping' hole is but a point flaw in a huge plane! Don't worry- a true masterpiece. :) :)